Comments on: “The Longest Night” – Chapter Nine: Black Leather Case http://nolessremarkable.wordpress.com/2008/02/20/the-longest-night-chapter-nine-black-leather-case/ Tue, 03 Nov 2009 13:23:08 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 By: nolessremarkable http://nolessremarkable.wordpress.com/2008/02/20/the-longest-night-chapter-nine-black-leather-case/#comment-233 nolessremarkable Mon, 03 Mar 2008 18:42:56 +0000 http://nolessremarkable.wordpress.com/?p=101#comment-233 <strong>nlr alicia sez: </strong>Aw, man - thank you guys so much. I'm really glad the de-jumpering (pblazer, I'm totally stealing that word - I love it) came across satisfyingly. It was hard to be sure what was too much or not enough, you know? When I'm not sure I usually opt to leave more to the imagination instead of interfering with the pictures that might be in your head, but it's really hard to know– wait I said that already. guh. inarticulate much? nlr alicia sez: Aw, man – thank you guys so much. I’m really glad the de-jumpering (pblazer, I’m totally stealing that word – I love it) came across satisfyingly. It was hard to be sure what was too much or not enough, you know?

When I’m not sure I usually opt to leave more to the imagination instead of interfering with the pictures that might be in your head, but it’s really hard to know– wait I said that already. guh. inarticulate much?

]]> By: Bones http://nolessremarkable.wordpress.com/2008/02/20/the-longest-night-chapter-nine-black-leather-case/#comment-191 Bones Sun, 24 Feb 2008 14:12:59 +0000 http://nolessremarkable.wordpress.com/?p=101#comment-191 *speechless...* *speechless…*

]]> By: pblazer http://nolessremarkable.wordpress.com/2008/02/20/the-longest-night-chapter-nine-black-leather-case/#comment-186 pblazer Thu, 21 Feb 2008 18:27:51 +0000 http://nolessremarkable.wordpress.com/?p=101#comment-186 Yay, chapter nine! I continue to like Seraphie the newly liberated. The opening scene with poor noncomprehending Watson staggering into the ring with two charging tyros was really well done. I like everyone characterizations very much! Sherlock Holmes, master detective-pah! It's all wonderful, but I thought the passage where Watson can't bring himself to look into Holmes' eyes when he's being de-jumpered was particularly excellent. That was a very poignant, realistic emotion and was very well conveyed. Keep going! Yay, chapter nine! I continue to like Seraphie the newly liberated. The opening scene with poor noncomprehending Watson staggering into the ring with two charging tyros was really well done. I like everyone characterizations very much! Sherlock Holmes, master detective-pah!

It’s all wonderful, but I thought the passage where Watson can’t bring himself to look into Holmes’ eyes when he’s being de-jumpered was particularly excellent. That was a very poignant, realistic emotion and was very well conveyed.

Keep going!

]]> By: elina http://nolessremarkable.wordpress.com/2008/02/20/the-longest-night-chapter-nine-black-leather-case/#comment-185 elina Thu, 21 Feb 2008 12:13:15 +0000 http://nolessremarkable.wordpress.com/?p=101#comment-185 OMG Watson is high, what next? :D *cannot wait* OMG Watson is high, what next? :D

*cannot wait*

]]> By: Semyaza http://nolessremarkable.wordpress.com/2008/02/20/the-longest-night-chapter-nine-black-leather-case/#comment-184 Semyaza Thu, 21 Feb 2008 05:47:03 +0000 http://nolessremarkable.wordpress.com/?p=101#comment-184 I'm still dead. The looks, the touching, the syringe, the jumper removal.... Eeeee! I hope you don't feel any pressure to get the chapters posted quickly. I know how much work goes into the writing and editing of a story of this length (says the person who takes months, if not years, to finish her own stories). This is a wonderful tale and well worth waiting for. It takes me to the happy place. :-* I’m still dead. The looks, the touching, the syringe, the jumper removal…. Eeeee!

I hope you don’t feel any pressure to get the chapters posted quickly. I know how much work goes into the writing and editing of a story of this length (says the person who takes months, if not years, to finish her own stories). This is a wonderful tale and well worth waiting for. It takes me to the happy place. :-*

]]> By: Lauren http://nolessremarkable.wordpress.com/2008/02/20/the-longest-night-chapter-nine-black-leather-case/#comment-182 Lauren Thu, 21 Feb 2008 05:04:08 +0000 http://nolessremarkable.wordpress.com/?p=101#comment-182 excellent chapter as per usual but know all i can think of after hearing Watson using cocaine is Wilson from House MD using speed which ironically was given to him by the sherlock based character :p I hope the next chapter will come soon!! excellent chapter as per usual but know all i can think of after hearing Watson using cocaine is Wilson from House MD using speed which ironically was given to him by the sherlock based character :p I hope the next chapter will come soon!!

]]> By: Anonymous http://nolessremarkable.wordpress.com/2008/02/20/the-longest-night-chapter-nine-black-leather-case/#comment-181 Anonymous Thu, 21 Feb 2008 04:22:58 +0000 http://nolessremarkable.wordpress.com/?p=101#comment-181 Waugh! You keep doing this! With the exquisite sexual and emotional tension and then ending the chapter and...yeah. Waugh! You keep doing this! With the exquisite sexual and emotional tension and then ending the chapter and…yeah.

]]> By: Anonymous http://nolessremarkable.wordpress.com/2008/02/20/the-longest-night-chapter-nine-black-leather-case/#comment-179 Anonymous Thu, 21 Feb 2008 03:56:41 +0000 http://nolessremarkable.wordpress.com/?p=101#comment-179 That's brilliant. C: And I completely agree that Holmes is jealous. When he said that Watson called for Villard in the carriage -- yeah, definitely jealous. ;) Can't wait for next chappie. That’s brilliant. C:

And I completely agree that Holmes is jealous. When he said that Watson called for Villard in the carriage — yeah, definitely jealous. ;)

Can’t wait for next chappie.

]]> By: twisted-sheets http://nolessremarkable.wordpress.com/2008/02/20/the-longest-night-chapter-nine-black-leather-case/#comment-178 twisted-sheets Thu, 21 Feb 2008 03:18:25 +0000 http://nolessremarkable.wordpress.com/?p=101#comment-178 OH MY GOD. You're killing me, slowly. Auuuuugh. Holmes is jealous, methinks. ;) Watson needs to hit them both in the head. ;) OH MY GOD.

You’re killing me, slowly. Auuuuugh. Holmes is jealous, methinks. ;)

Watson needs to hit them both in the head. ;)

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