No, no, don’t panic. This is not bad news for the eight or nine folks out there who are following this ridiculous saga. (Well, that is unless you were looking forward to only having four more chapters to slog through.)
The thing of it is, is, the structure of this last third had been really bugging me. There was something out of whack in chapters nine through eleven and it finally dawned on me what it was (After- what?- a month? Yes, I’m just that intelligent.)
Any road, I think I’ve got it fixed now so what’s going to happen is this. I’m still going to post Chapter Nine mostly on schedule – within a day, I think – but I’ve got to fix the ending since I’m moving some junk to Ten. There’s a whole lot more rejiggering I know you’re even less interested in so I’ll cut to the chase:
- Three parts instead of Two (Part Three is titled “Fête Galante” today. We’ll see if that sticks.)
- Fourteen chapters instead of twelve
- 60k words instead of 50 (We’re on 40 if that’s any help.)
Chapter Nine onward will be a little shorter, but that means I can post them faster. Also they’re now chock-a-block with h/w. (Except a little bit in Twelve.)
As promised on HolmesSlash yesterday, Chapter Nine still boasts sex, drugs, and waltzes but now you’ll see all those things in Ten, too. Except the waltzes.
So I’ll… What’s that you say? “Shut up and get back to writing?” Well, it’s your funeral.
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I’m actually having an awful lot of fun with this story and I’m glad there are a handful of folks out there who’re enjoying it, too.
For the couple of you who’ve shown interest in these things I’m going to post another run down of the characters. Yeah, Séraphie is original and I can’t tell you how grateful I am to those who’ve taken the time to tell me you like her. She’s got a few surprises still in store for John and I’d hate to think she was completely annoying.
Thanks for reading. I’ll try to make it worthwhile as we head on into the mist.


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Tuesday, 19 February, 2008 at 15:15
Yvonne
Yay! When I saw the topic, I thought for sure that the story was going on hiatus or (horrors!) going to remain unfinished. Glad to hear otherwise…now start writing again soon so we can all see what happens!
Tuesday, 19 February, 2008 at 15:51
Semyaza
I like Séraphie. I had a theory about her but it seems I’m wrong.
I await her surprises with bated breath.
Tuesday, 19 February, 2008 at 18:05
Bones
Whew! That was a close call…I thought there would be a long long long long pause….goodness…
I’m enjoying the story…heck I love all your writings! I look forward to the next chapter complete with sex, drugs, and rock—er–no—I mean waltzes
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Wednesday, 20 February, 2008 at 0:03
twisted-sheets
I love your story to bits (in fact, if it were possible, I loved it so much I would have married it). Take as much as time as you feel you need to finish the story. Thank you so much for writing this and putting so much effort in it.
*grins*
(hahaha. I admit, I want to know what’s going to happen next and I want the H/W bits, but I’ve learned patience since I’ve read an author named GRRM).
Wednesday, 20 February, 2008 at 8:13
WolfieSara
I am one of those nine (believe it or not, as I’ve been appallingly remiss on promptly commenting lately
), and echo others who have proclaimed that they are waiting on tenterhooks.
I’m so glad you’re having fun with this. You are not alone.
Waltzes gone from #10? Oh, NOES; that hurt.
[j/k - am eagerly anticipating!]
Wednesday, 20 February, 2008 at 8:14
WolfieSara
P.S. “Nine” should have been in inverted commas, as we all know there are many more folks following this.
[headdesk]
Wednesday, 20 February, 2008 at 21:59
nolessremarkable
Thanks, guys.
I know I sound like a broken record (said the dinosaur), but it means an awful lot to get such great words of cheer and support.
twisted-sheets, thank you.
I think you probably saw a comment that is not there now and I really can’t thank you enough for your kindness.
It’s proving to be a lot of work to get this baby out there. I thought writing it the first time was difficult enough, but this re-writing and re-writing and… phew. It’s exhausting. But it really is a labor of love – I’d be doing it whether anyone read it or not I guess because the story actually means a lot to me and I want to tell it right.
Any road, thanks for sticking around. You guys are awesome.