Comments on: “The Longest Night” – Chapter Eight: Gray Eyes

By: Bones

Bones — Tue, 19 Feb 2008 04:17:07 +0000

oh the horror of suspense….just …arghhh!!!

your descriptions are very vivid and i am luvin’ it. poor watson…needs a good slap he does. amazing how you’ve picked them up (h and w) where they left off…can still easily read each other like an old book.

i’ll try and be patient for the next installment…*bites nails frantically*

and dang…you just had to make the title of the next chapter more enticing…that’s just evil!

By: pblazer

pblazer — Mon, 18 Feb 2008 23:13:31 +0000

I’m really enjoying the thickening plot. I too quite like Seraphie. I’m loving this portrayl of Watson too. Such a gentleman! And he’s so determined not to read anything into Holmes’ actions that he doesn’t even realize he’s one side of a triangle. I love that! He is such a modest guy I don’t think it would ever occur to him. And so chapter 9 is coming soon, right? Right?

By: Semyaza

Semyaza — Mon, 18 Feb 2008 06:27:04 +0000

Oh, good lord. You’ve killed me. *iz ded*

By: Lauren

Lauren — Mon, 18 Feb 2008 03:52:16 +0000

i really, really love Séraphie, she is just so damn charming and i really like the fact that she is in the story because i find that with a lot of slash fan fiction the women side characters are there just to look bad and bitch. She, i think really adds more depth and makes the story more dimensional along with Villard and the good blend of all the characters gives unity to the story. uh, is she an original character? i don’t know because i haven’t read all of the sherlock Holmes books
well anyways still love Watson and can’t wait to see more of Holmes, can’t wait />: -) !!!

By: twisted-sheets

twisted-sheets — Mon, 18 Feb 2008 01:37:34 +0000

Oh lalala. I am beginning to love our golden courtesan. And sweet, sweet John. To have such man be obviously concerned about you and you being so sweetly naive….

God, the suspense kills me.

By: elina

elina — Mon, 18 Feb 2008 00:29:13 +0000

Ahh, the suspence!
Holmes and Watson are already communicating without words, but Watson you moron, can you still not see that your Holmsie loves you?!

Ooh, is there something else than just air-guns going on between Holmes and Villard? Jealousy perhaps?

Don’t keep us waiting for too long

By: Anonymous

Anonymous — Mon, 18 Feb 2008 00:06:05 +0000

Now I have a taste of what it must have been like for the original readers of Doyle’s serials in The Strand. I find that the modern penchant for instant communication has so corrupted my patience that I just can’t take the waiting.

Honestly, I can’t believe I’m saying that. I generally feel that fanfic writers push plot ahead to the detriment of good character development. You could certainly never be accused of that!

Best wishes as you continue to develop this wonderful world. I remain your staunch admirer :>)